Sunday, October 26, 2014

Thoughts On The Radar Beauty

For this writing piece, all that was given was a black and white picture of woman with a constant blinking radar for a face. While this was a free writing assignment for a few minutes in class, what is posted is a slightly revised version. I made the decision to continue with my thoughts because I still found myself having more ideas. While I know I could resume on with the same topic, I felt that I would quickly begin to ramble. Situations like these are rare for me because my brain typically becomes blank when I start to write.

                The reason behind choosing this writing piece is to showcase my abilities when it comes to creative writing. I enjoy these types of writing assignments because being able to creatively write allows for some of my best ideas to come out. Doing pieces of this kind remind me of picture narratives from elementary school which were my favorite. Although this writing piece is not particularly a decent one, I am proud of what I was able to come up with. For me, it is quite simple to create an imaginative idea in a limited amount of time. If a visual aspect is provided, I find myself with countless ideas. My problem is with properly writing down my thoughts fluently. After I exhaust myself of my thoughts, I begin to repeat myself. Towards the end of this writing piece, I became tangential on the fact that the woman in the picture is “searching”. Although it is the overall aspect of the piece, I got wrapped up in the idea and repeated it twice just in different words. I have noticed this habit of mine countless times, including while revising this piece. I chose to leave it as is to showcase that I still struggle with this problem.  

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